My Thoughts
If You Were.....
If you were moon,
I would be the dark,
To feel the warmth of your light,
Being your companion in the night.
If you were stars,
I would be the sky,
In the space to hold you tight,
And not let you be far from my sight.
If you were rainbow,
I would be its colour and light,
Together we would smile,
For the nature so bright.
If you were music,
I would be its melody,
And remain forever with you,
With the love which is true.
If you were mine,
I would be yours,
And together we would live,
With many love for each other to give.
Love between us would bloom,
Like the flowers in the spring,
And the fragnance would spread,
Far and far till the heven's king.
If you were moon,
I would be the dark,
To feel the warmth of your light,
Being your companion in the night.
If you were stars,
I would be the sky,
In the space to hold you tight,
And not let you be far from my sight.
If you were rainbow,
I would be its colour and light,
Together we would smile,
For the nature so bright.
If you were music,
I would be its melody,
And remain forever with you,
With the love which is true.
If you were mine,
I would be yours,
And together we would live,
With many love for each other to give.
Love between us would bloom,
Like the flowers in the spring,
And the fragnance would spread,
Far and far till the heven's king.
Total Comments 5
Comments
 |  Great poem...... I don't know whether the fragnance has reached till heaven's king or not but it has reached till my room & hope the fragnance of your love keep on spreading....... |
Posted 31-08-2007 at 08:24 AM by Khushboo  |
| | Wao!!! The poem is really good.How do these beutiful lines grow in your mind?I can never write as beutiful poem as this.Thank you.I enjoyed it. |
| Posted 01-09-2007 at 08:01 PM by kharelnirmal |
| |  Thankx for the comment your comments inspire me to write more. |
| Posted 05-09-2007 at 05:12 AM by Sarensa |
| | Nice poem. But did you know that it's the hormones that drives the feeling our of you? Hahah. Just joking. |
| Posted 25-11-2007 at 06:18 PM by openheart |
| | Nice Poem,keep it up!Really nice poem ! I hope its written for someone ur special,whom I know !hehehe ! I dint notice till date ki euta sahityakar, tyo pani yati majja ko,tapai bhitra Bhitra lukya rahechha ! great ! neways, wanna read more frm u ! keep it up ! |
| Posted 09-12-2007 at 01:59 AM by SPRimal |
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